Cinematography analysis First + Improved p1

12 Good/Bad Shots 

This Shot is good as it has leading lines you start from the path at the front which leads you into the college, the bar of white also leads your eyes to the entrance of the college and also the middle of the frame.

This shot has a mixture of good and bad elements, although the leading lines down the middle of the frame this is not needed as we have no intention of the viewer to be looking at the bottom of the corridor but at the student using their power. I also find the radiators a bit distracting and they're unneeded although there is nothing we could do about them.

I think this is a good shot although the subject is in the middle of the frame and not at a offset we can really focus on the characters clothing and the character is the first thing we look at before anything else in the shot as we really didn't need the viewer to look anywhere.

This is a bad shot, totally out of focus and there is no space in front of the characters for them to move, if we where to retake this shot we would balance out the characters in the shot so there was no negative space.

Although there is no moving space in this and a lot of negative space we really captured the emotion on the characters face.

This was a bad shot out of shot and cluttered with unneeded objects.

the diagonal angle on this shot really makes it a nice piece also how the elements of the shots are balanced out.

This is another bad shot, although the shot is %100 in focus on the character which is meant to be in focus. the angle the picture is taken at is really off and there is clutter/distractions in the shot in the negative space which really makes the shot look bad.

This shot is good although the subject is not at a offset having it at the centre with a plain background makes a nice portrait shot of the character. The blue board adds another element to the picture which contrasts with the white background, The colour could represent the characters feeling or mood.

This shot is way too cluttered and is not nice too look at the character if at an offset would look a lot better than centre and have a lot of negative space full of distractions is not a good look.

This shot is full of random elements such as the projector on the ceiling which is very ugly and the random posters in the background, even the colours of the chairs makes this shot look bad.

This shot although is cluttered with random objects is very good we can see the characters stern look and we can see the side of the other characters face and just that little bit of face we can almost tell their emotion looking back at the other.